Doctor Kitty

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Revived and, unfortunately, untouched.

This feels very "teenage melodrama." I suggest putting some more meat on its bones.

bubblewrapped said the main things. I'd like to say that this poem does nothing to go beyond the ordinary. In fact, the only thing that makes it a poem is ...

Good technical use of grammar and punctuation; I spot no major structural flaws save for some missing commas. However, the story is a laundry list. "I did this. Then he ...

I love the word choice; it adds some sophistication. However, the thoughts expressed seem to be incomplete and unrelated. Good words and imagery, but I, the reader, am unaware of ...

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That's no reason to leave. People have disagreements all the time. Stay. Also, Goodbye/Departure thread.

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Banned for having an association with emo.

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Kitty! :O :O :O